slam poets Response

3 things that you are looking forward to learning, developing or using in your poetry over the course of our Slam workshops.

1. the of the things that I'm am looking forward to learning is how to write a poem.

2. the second one is what 's the  between a rap and a poem

3.  is a song a type of poem.

2 things that Greg or Beth Anne reinforced that we have already been doing in class, or you are already using in your own writing.

1.one  of the things Beth and Greg already said that i already new was that a poem does not have to rhyme.

3 things that you are looking forward to learning, developing or using in your poetry over the course of our Slam workshops.1. poem that you wrote yesterday. Here is your chance to continue to work on step 1 of the 3 step poetry writing process (step 1 - write, revise, edit and proofread, step 2 - memorize, so you can connect with the audience, step 3 - perform!). Take some time to polish your poem from the 10 minutes of writing you did yesterday.

miami

when  i wake up in the morning i feel the  Miami breeze thew my face
when  i get ready i know it's a good day.
then i turn on the t.v and i hear the Miami have just bin adjusted
with dwyane wade , leBron  James ,Chris bosh have just bin canted.




perfected , perfected it rhymes with Alexis
it's good i bet you wish you could
live in Miami with the beaches you feel like a million bucks
you'll feel like a track filled with cash money just like bees & there honey


Miami the sun shine state the suns always shinning I'm not lining when i say the girls are hot
like the sun and Venus but Pluto not  hot like Miami


and wear back to Canada wear the snows always falling and snow flake
and now it's to late Miami to far away to feel the sun shine state Miami
MIAMI 

WORLD OF WORK

Wednesday October 27 me and my class are going to a high school that has stations with things you might want to go through during high school.




The thing i found most interesting  at word of work was the  Construction Sector: And what it is i s person that does construction, and does various things by either fixing or building buildings. that's the tipe  of job i would what to do if i don't make the NBA.

 

How are you creative

Hi I'm creative because i have many talents and  things i now  how to do and love to do.
some of   my talents are dancing, playing basketball and  play the drums. Some of the things that I'm creative at is writing such as writing raps which you can check out on my blog and writing poems you can check that on my blog to. Some of  the  ways my talents affect other are for example my drumming skills it affect others because i play in the school band and lost of people get to hear me play.

lsland man

Island Man (for a Caribbean island man in London who still wakes up the sound of the sea)
by Grace NicholsMorning
and island man wakes up
to the sound of blue surf
in his headthe steady breaking and worming
wild seabirds
and fishermen pushing out to sea
the sun surfacing defiantly
from the east
of his small emerald island

He always comes back
groggily groggily
comes back to sands
of a grey metallic soar
to a surge of wheels
to dull North Circular roar
muffling muffling
his crumpled muffling
island man heaves himself
another London day

I would like to wake up in Miami Florida because it's so nice and I  love the view. And i thank it's the best place in the world.

My Class Mates

rap
My class mates , my class mates
cl , cl, cl, my class mates.
My name is joker and yes from batman
if you know i love to play pack man
I'm so fresh and yes like an ice cube if you mess with me
i don't like u. my raps are so fresh like a pair of  Nike's
when Zuhair  takes a shot he gets to happy .
and then i tell him that it was a air ball  and then i made
a move and then he falls.
My class mates , my class mates, my cl, cl ,cl, my class mates.
now  theirs this girl named Claire shes really smart
but not so fear. i beat her in ball and she a old me chips
then the next day she eat them all.
my class mates, my class mates my cl, cl ,cl ,my class.
now Noah 6 foot 1 you say your not tall but you way a ton.
now Noah  your good at ball  but last time i check i made you fall
with   my moves i took you to school you say you have a shout
i do to. My teacher, my teacher, my t, t, t, my teacher.
now miss Pollock the sick es  teacher around when shes sings
she has a wonderful  sound not like mateen trying  to rap when people here it they say stop that track.
R8A, R8A,  R .8. 8. R8A
now miss i Hope you like my rap it's what's in my
mine so stay ton for another time.


written by:Will A.K.A-joker
[COME CHECK OUT MY BLOG]


Next Track
next day 4 period 4

Lighting the way

 

If I was one thing, I’d be a candle
Lighting the way so you can handle
Your life easier without woes
Not having to fight with your foes.

I’d help keep you from stumbling over
Things blocking your path to an open door.
If I light your path, life is easier,
Even strong winds, my light will not deter.

No matter what, I’m here for you
To cheer you up when you are blue.
Do not fret when times get tough,
If things look down or kind of rough.

Just remember, I’m always here,
In your heart, close and near.
I will help you out in every way,
Happiness and love in your heart will stay.

Don’t blow me out, that’s one request
Unless it’s me you do detest.
I do not try to hurt anyone
That isn’t good or any fun.

But one day you may leave me behind
You may no longer need my light to shine.
If that day comes, go on your way
And I will hope to see you again one day.

If one day, I don’t appear,
Do not worry, do not fear
I may be gone, but in your heart
The light I gave you did not depart.

It will be there forever and a day
To always bring happiness and light your way.
Farewell for now, I’m needed elsewhere
If your path grows dark, in your heart, I’m there.

So I’m really not gone, just not seen,
I would not leave, I’m not that mean.
Only one simple request that I must say,
Please, never forget those who lit your way.

 

 

empathy

Empathy is whan you put yourself in someone eles shoe like if someone had a lost you will fill for them.
EMPATHY

welcome

Was up it's the joker A.K.A-Will  my real name is really willeme butt you can call me joker. I am so happy your here and i hope you in joy  my blog. The thing i like to do is play sports like football, baseball, soccer, basketball, and hockey i also like to play the drums. The sports  i like to play the most is  basketball. iv made the the basketball all star team three years in a row. i could have made the basketball team more it's just  that i was in the state of Orlando Florida i was born there.so i hope you like my blog and enjoy it.